1. Honey...
2. Yes?
1. Please don't be mad.
1. But honestly i cant handle you anymore.
2. What is that supposed to mean?
1. It means your crazy and i cant take it anymore...
1. So we're done..
2. I'm crazy?
2. No your the freak who is always trying to control me.
1. Whatever... Get out.
2. Peace.
2. What is that supposed to mean?
1. It means your crazy and i cant take it anymore...
1. So we're done..
2. I'm crazy?
2. No your the freak who is always trying to control me.
1. Whatever... Get out.
2. Peace.
WHAT?!?!?
ReplyDeleteYou obviously wrote that in ten seconds hahaha
ReplyDeleteAction: Well obviously there is nothing but crappy action. Its kinda lame and all over the place.
ReplyDeleteConflict: In the beginning the girl thinks everything is okay but in reality the guy breaks up with her and they get in a fight.
Event: The boy gets what he wants when she gets out of the car and says peace. He gets the break up he wanted and the crappy relationship is over.
Obviously This was written very quickly, I definitely have room to expand on it and make it better. So we'll see what happens.